tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post1400685153917641366..comments2023-10-21T04:55:36.672-04:00Comments on Urbanality: At Last: BabylonSteven Marty Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-16883059487329691502012-04-22T11:37:39.796-04:002012-04-22T11:37:39.796-04:00If not, one of your best yet. Fabulous writing...If not, one of your best yet. Fabulous writing...emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-57953987762992277832011-09-27T06:59:08.063-04:002011-09-27T06:59:08.063-04:00An excellent write and an enjoyable read.An excellent write and an enjoyable read.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-67301462347747433282011-09-26T04:29:33.798-04:002011-09-26T04:29:33.798-04:00Oh, this was incredible! Excellent write.Oh, this was incredible! Excellent write.Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14368539518339009833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-60800034064179679942011-09-25T21:45:06.227-04:002011-09-25T21:45:06.227-04:00I dig it :)
happy gooseberry day
http://lynnaima....I dig it :)<br />happy gooseberry day<br /><br />http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/09/25/karmic-disobedience/LBTLhttp://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/09/25/karmic-disobedience/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-35929998932874189152011-09-25T21:43:00.740-04:002011-09-25T21:43:00.740-04:00amazing piece.
thanks for the yummy treat.amazing piece.<br /><br />thanks for the yummy treat.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-67496408995787590852011-08-22T00:29:24.100-04:002011-08-22T00:29:24.100-04:00This is why there is whisky in NyThis is why there is whisky in NyAmy enoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-44491583444566984332011-05-19T06:26:27.607-04:002011-05-19T06:26:27.607-04:00keep writing,
check out short story slam today. ...keep writing,<br /><br /><br />check out short story slam today. hope to see your participation.Bluebell Books Twitter Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346482636849975765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-42247821697846738422010-10-19T02:45:14.331-04:002010-10-19T02:45:14.331-04:00BeautifulBeautifulunremarkable_mhttp://baobabpapers.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-87871486560200007322010-09-10T10:41:07.103-04:002010-09-10T10:41:07.103-04:00Great One Shot. I know I am late on my responses ...Great One Shot. I know I am late on my responses this week, but just like my response, better late than never in your poem. A beautiful poem, you captured the distance piece in which, things can change. But the promise was still kept, and that is important.Corbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08168756186612658336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-10019938419216270162010-09-09T07:02:32.996-04:002010-09-09T07:02:32.996-04:00Geez, all I said was, "Do you want me to fix ...Geez, all I said was, "Do you want me to fix you breakfast?" <br /><br />Kidding aside, from the clever title down through the exotic and charged poem itself, this is a sexy, unsettling, poignant ride.Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-56999157823116517152010-09-09T04:47:42.404-04:002010-09-09T04:47:42.404-04:00that was a fantastic piece...really enjoyed it..yo...that was a fantastic piece...really enjoyed it..you wrote some great lines here...i loved the way you linked in the past with the present, and for me vodka nicotine kisses was a great piece..cheers for one shot peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-44891032277374159942010-09-08T21:55:34.918-04:002010-09-08T21:55:34.918-04:00Thanks for the feedback everyone!Thanks for the feedback everyone!Steven Marty Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-32224189017158185382010-09-08T21:10:13.544-04:002010-09-08T21:10:13.544-04:00WOW..i am speechless..felt savage beats in my hear...WOW..i am speechless..felt savage beats in my heart..i love this one,so flowing..raw..exotic beauty! EXCELLENT one shot..:))Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-87086282103093400972010-09-08T11:49:35.430-04:002010-09-08T11:49:35.430-04:00Amazing writing with such an impressive flow of wo...Amazing writing with such an impressive flow of words. Captivating!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-51017924243362228732010-09-08T11:45:16.950-04:002010-09-08T11:45:16.950-04:00I'm a sucker for a good close and you tied the...I'm a sucker for a good close and you tied the promise and the departing end well. Excellent:)<br /><br />-J.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05208163779302805785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-51903317149838723232010-09-08T11:08:40.486-04:002010-09-08T11:08:40.486-04:00Sometimes promises kept late are better. Nice wri...Sometimes promises kept late are better. Nice write, Steven!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-70146219075675981262010-09-07T23:50:20.314-04:002010-09-07T23:50:20.314-04:00The transience, the recoiling -- powerful images h...The transience, the recoiling -- powerful images here. Good one, sir.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-36294089649447946412010-09-07T23:20:02.078-04:002010-09-07T23:20:02.078-04:00I found this to be beautifully written.I found this to be beautifully written.Rosehttp://rosedesrochers.todays-woman.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-53764821570532093892010-09-07T22:35:21.609-04:002010-09-07T22:35:21.609-04:00"..but morning after promises rarely make it ..."..but morning after promises rarely make it to sunset." - that was so brilliant. It's a condensed epic poetic tale and I really enjoyed it.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-91837619379176500732010-09-07T20:49:50.386-04:002010-09-07T20:49:50.386-04:00Excellent!Excellent!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526666908406849762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-73056783556630703772010-09-07T20:40:28.473-04:002010-09-07T20:40:28.473-04:00Events appear different when the daylight comes.Events appear different when the daylight comes.KBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02621937316200868307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-26842649920130501522010-09-07T19:50:52.083-04:002010-09-07T19:50:52.083-04:00Love the allusions and the way you wrote this. Fan...Love the allusions and the way you wrote this. Fantastic poem and the line "I made for Lagash /<br />without a backward glance" = pure music. Cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-84474808509543160042010-09-07T18:57:52.782-04:002010-09-07T18:57:52.782-04:00Delicious...and that look in her eyes belies the c...Delicious...and that look in her eyes belies the cross on her forehead--yes, we know what she is!Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-82330340577639259342010-09-07T18:21:49.016-04:002010-09-07T18:21:49.016-04:00Interesting - could be a woman or a nation before ...Interesting - could be a woman or a nation before it's fall.<br />Loved the weaving of history<br /><br />Great One Shot<br /><br />Moon SmilesOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-44512725541773604442010-09-07T17:47:46.431-04:002010-09-07T17:47:46.431-04:00that was wicked cool. some great lines...before i ...that was wicked cool. some great lines...before i tasted your fetid waters...excellent one shot!Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com