tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post178696028473555326..comments2023-10-21T04:55:36.672-04:00Comments on Urbanality: TidesSteven Marty Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-39311722273053980512013-05-10T18:05:45.838-04:002013-05-10T18:05:45.838-04:00Simply beautiful! Love it! Simply beautiful! Love it! Junying Kirkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06949797617629620982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-80649838052222238912013-01-15T18:45:40.705-05:002013-01-15T18:45:40.705-05:00Love this piece. Really like how it began, sustain...Love this piece. Really like how it began, sustained the middle with a perfect ending. emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-17172283515655079712011-01-31T23:14:00.356-05:002011-01-31T23:14:00.356-05:00nice one!nice one!Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-33789643274368462792011-01-30T21:16:34.298-05:002011-01-30T21:16:34.298-05:00Well done, I enjoyed the whole piece !Well done, I enjoyed the whole piece !JL Dodgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12713220952100680871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-56120247053107563522011-01-30T11:00:43.211-05:002011-01-30T11:00:43.211-05:00Very cool poem. Here’s mine. http://thelunaticsdia...Very cool poem. Here’s mine. http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2011/01/searing-eternity.html If you have a twitter, follow me (my username is MsMatsui)!batsickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15019758024683486338noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-485678585760112092011-01-30T09:54:04.517-05:002011-01-30T09:54:04.517-05:00Lovely, beautifully said :)Lovely, beautifully said :)Gracetalkinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15069072707779064616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-44167728170525761372011-01-30T09:27:29.836-05:002011-01-30T09:27:29.836-05:00You're speaking of love as transient, or a tra...You're speaking of love as transient, or a transient kind of love. And you do it very well indeed.Glynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10802111972232088511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-69324210344842211492011-01-30T09:21:07.027-05:002011-01-30T09:21:07.027-05:00It was as if the tide came in with the moon...the ...It was as if the tide came in with the moon...the great controler of the tides and the two were aware at the end that looking back would do little good. Last stanza cinches the piece.Jerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-51126904137678550772011-01-30T08:31:06.444-05:002011-01-30T08:31:06.444-05:00the water eroding all evidence - love your take on...the water eroding all evidence - love your take on the promptClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-76380246490175148152011-01-30T08:09:04.539-05:002011-01-30T08:09:04.539-05:00nice...i like the close...the waves eroding our pa...nice...i like the close...the waves eroding our passing perhaps in light of the words shared...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-47547607004167255202011-01-30T07:40:49.042-05:002011-01-30T07:40:49.042-05:00I agree with "alotus-poetry": that third...I agree with "alotus-poetry": that third stanza of yours really does it for me. Thanks.Andreashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05129547380377962436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-3629448592254011282011-01-30T03:20:34.128-05:002011-01-30T03:20:34.128-05:00"We traced the shoreline
with deliberate foot..."We traced the shoreline<br />with deliberate footsteps<br />in the failing light."<br /><br />I love this verse tremendously. I really enjoyed your poem very much. The poem itself ebbs and flows like the tides.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-81093592947509531912011-01-30T02:27:10.063-05:002011-01-30T02:27:10.063-05:00i think its lovely, and you seem to have caught ec...i think its lovely, and you seem to have caught echoes of what i was feeling when i chose my images.iquanyinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13383272175223892567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-18116026789451765412011-01-30T02:17:24.876-05:002011-01-30T02:17:24.876-05:00Agree with Adam - the last stanza is killer!Agree with Adam - the last stanza is killer!Another Man's Dreamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04453440630317550594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-8167625182844312052011-01-30T02:08:59.391-05:002011-01-30T02:08:59.391-05:00The tides ebb representing loves lost, or sadness ...The tides ebb representing loves lost, or sadness shared... hmmm. nice.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-24116862027367106592011-01-30T01:44:44.481-05:002011-01-30T01:44:44.481-05:00Succinct stanzas that flow in emulation of success...Succinct stanzas that flow in emulation of successive waveforms. First two stanzas do lull a bit, though seems to me by design, building to the mention of the crash in third. Last stanza is certainly killer.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-60502068248988192802011-01-28T20:25:15.844-05:002011-01-28T20:25:15.844-05:00Yea, that's the one. Much better!Yea, that's the one. Much better!Khakjaan Wessingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05501187261486087495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-6781154768461593202011-01-28T02:23:35.509-05:002011-01-28T02:23:35.509-05:00Hmm, too many judgment words in this one imo. &quo...Hmm, too many judgment words in this one imo. "languid," "solemn" "pointed" are the 3 most dangerous words to your poem imo. Maybe I'm cranky & missing something tho. <br /><br />I reread a few more times... I think I know what's throwing me off: if I know my SMG poetry, it seems to me that the last stanza would establish more opportunities as the opening than as the close. Ah, but maybe I am judging the poem when I should be observing it?Khakjaan Wessingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05501187261486087495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-21128172108761057552011-01-28T00:07:45.875-05:002011-01-28T00:07:45.875-05:00Ah, I love the notion of exploring Tides as love p...Ah, I love the notion of exploring Tides as love poem, lovely piece... I wrote an expanded series of 10 poems on Tides on my website: www.emilypknight.comEmilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04278563830544719102noreply@blogger.com