tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post2451607093315542900..comments2023-10-21T04:55:36.672-04:00Comments on Urbanality: Manhattan Morning Dream SequenceSteven Marty Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-17671535110798034142013-09-12T20:26:46.831-04:002013-09-12T20:26:46.831-04:00What a beautiful picture you paint, Steven. I thin...What a beautiful picture you paint, Steven. I think you must be home, edenEden Bayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08043540142363106345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-32576186947112087762013-09-03T14:44:40.939-04:002013-09-03T14:44:40.939-04:00In the tick of a clock the stillness of the dawn i...In the tick of a clock the stillness of the dawn is shaken by tin horns and steel cattle as they herd through the tunnels. <br /><br />Really nice - I almost had a flash back of the olden days, when their truly were horses, wagons, and such. A nice pace, slowly stretches and then everything starts chiming in and it is NY as we know it today! :)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-59552623347472933732013-08-30T19:18:34.350-04:002013-08-30T19:18:34.350-04:00Your city poems are among my favorite; this is ano...Your city poems are among my favorite; this is another. The sounds of the great waking up city and the feeling at the end that you are part of the noise it makes is in its own way a kind of zen meditation. Liked much!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-78598417725499555632013-08-30T14:59:56.741-04:002013-08-30T14:59:56.741-04:00Your skill with sensory detail creates a strong se...Your skill with sensory detail creates a strong sense of place and atmosphere. Excellent descriptive writing.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-26541138913683552132013-08-30T12:57:53.694-04:002013-08-30T12:57:53.694-04:00nice..i love the mood in this...the watching her w...nice..i love the mood in this...the watching her wake... def. has its own magic...the The city’s veins course, and crisscross with Pullman cars packed like trains bound for Birkenau....made me swallow a bit - ha - strong image - i've been on the metro in paris during rush hour - goodness - you can hardly breathe...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-65240805475549032182013-08-30T11:04:16.467-04:002013-08-30T11:04:16.467-04:00nice...i like the blood pressure of the burrough r...nice...i like the blood pressure of the burrough rising with the ascent of the sun...the tin cattle (cars) def give a sense of hte traffic, but play off the movement in and out of the city...nice creative capture of the morning in the city.... Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-55918998426705423202012-04-13T08:09:56.509-04:002012-04-13T08:09:56.509-04:00Now that I've had the briefest exposure to the...Now that I've had the briefest exposure to the city, i'm starting to glimpse an inderstanding. I want to go back and reread everything I've read of you, also. Thanks for this timely (to me) posting of this excellent (to me - and I bet, to many) work. Oh, I also want to go back to the city. Now.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17574758568799563836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-14886984971431622672011-02-12T16:19:19.740-05:002011-02-12T16:19:19.740-05:00Wonderful description of a Manhattan morning. Thi...Wonderful description of a Manhattan morning. This city is a writers dream -you do an excellent job portraiting it...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-62557209425730671682011-02-08T12:50:56.481-05:002011-02-08T12:50:56.481-05:00The concept of concrete having "a moment to h...The concept of concrete having "a moment to heal" is for some reason attractive to me. I am also enamored of "tin horns of steel cattle." NYC traffic in my memory is populated by seventeen foot carbureted Detroit iron with damaged, flapping body parts. Yellow cabs painted with a brush, chrome and all.Eric Lesterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08733135624320355082noreply@blogger.com