tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post686529121199291621..comments2023-10-21T04:55:36.672-04:00Comments on Urbanality: ee BukowskiSteven Marty Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comBlogger38125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-68846207760741224862012-04-09T21:02:07.490-04:002012-04-09T21:02:07.490-04:00Two of my my favorite poets written by a third.
N...Two of my my favorite poets written by a third.<br /><br />Nice, <br />edenEden Bayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08043540142363106345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-50064198975434651692010-12-31T15:54:43.913-05:002010-12-31T15:54:43.913-05:00I forgot about this one. I like it.I forgot about this one. I like it.Khakjaan Wessingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05501187261486087495noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-63695038318870837542010-09-19T08:32:20.831-04:002010-09-19T08:32:20.831-04:00Great combination of poets. I loved the style,whic...Great combination of poets. I loved the style,which had much to do with the greatness of the poem. Great One Shot.Corbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08168756186612658336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-19995210436307332122010-09-17T00:18:22.518-04:002010-09-17T00:18:22.518-04:00Loved the style and the tribute to these poets was...Loved the style and the tribute to these poets was marvelous<br /><br />Thanks for sharing with One Shot<br /><br />Moon smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-24079075672448633032010-09-16T19:43:54.539-04:002010-09-16T19:43:54.539-04:00woah-- hit me! this verse inhabits its space compl...woah-- hit me! this verse inhabits its space completely. congrats!<br />http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-7860392603956700852010-09-16T03:49:55.843-04:002010-09-16T03:49:55.843-04:00This is your realm -- where you excel, there is no...This is your realm -- where you excel, there is no other in our poetry united groups that can do this as well as penned here.<br /><br />Ingenious --<br /><br />Joanny<br />http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-61773792664146807812010-09-16T00:24:08.622-04:002010-09-16T00:24:08.622-04:00Comes out effotless - Did the words pour out in a ...Comes out effotless - Did the words pour out in a great big rush or did you have to labour throught it?<br /><br />It's too lovely - for words.ninotazizhttp://www.poemsbyninotaziz.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-15925242062921632942010-09-15T20:23:48.539-04:002010-09-15T20:23:48.539-04:00Very clever and very well done.Very clever and very well done.Maureenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-35377026250834526072010-09-15T20:08:15.728-04:002010-09-15T20:08:15.728-04:00simply and to the point, yet long in thought nice ...simply and to the point, yet long in thought nice work oneshotKodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-9648532857388439412010-09-15T17:04:17.810-04:002010-09-15T17:04:17.810-04:00love the way your words wiggle both in physical fo...love the way your words wiggle both in physical form and in poetic form.<br />beautiful entry.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-75032059604846633582010-09-15T16:43:55.708-04:002010-09-15T16:43:55.708-04:00Creative.......well doneCreative.......well doneWhitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-63374874666911477022010-09-15T15:27:24.831-04:002010-09-15T15:27:24.831-04:00this was so very well done...a really enjoyable re...this was so very well done...a really enjoyable read...cheers peteOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-6972342685239908492010-09-15T14:40:53.283-04:002010-09-15T14:40:53.283-04:00Ha ha! FUN! (And by the way, I love your tagline...Ha ha! FUN! (And by the way, I love your tagline).Belinda Munozhttp://thehalfwaypoint.net/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-42334820912926566872010-09-15T13:52:17.660-04:002010-09-15T13:52:17.660-04:00a very creative structure to this.. well done..!
...a very creative structure to this.. well done..! <br /><br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/09/14/in-your-dreams/" rel="nofollow">My 1 Shot</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-17948377530131261152010-09-15T13:16:53.409-04:002010-09-15T13:16:53.409-04:00It's hard to do that eecummings stuff I think....It's hard to do that eecummings stuff I think. Yours far more successful than mine. I think you captured the Bukowski spirit too. It has withitall a Damon-Runyan effect..."got a horse right here, etc.." Cool to get that much in few words. Extremely poetic. Thank you. Gay (@beachanny)Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-6525943532032806022010-09-15T12:28:59.162-04:002010-09-15T12:28:59.162-04:00Fascinating poetic mashup. Kudos!Fascinating poetic mashup. Kudos!Ben Langhinrichshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16077213274836551992noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-10680393021901559622010-09-15T12:25:46.749-04:002010-09-15T12:25:46.749-04:00Excellent, masterful blend of two distinctive poet...Excellent, masterful blend of two distinctive poets.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-73250798043276582442010-09-15T11:01:45.163-04:002010-09-15T11:01:45.163-04:00Great visual poetry. Liked the flow!
nowhere isla...Great visual poetry. Liked the flow!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/09/nowhere-island.html" rel="nofollow">nowhere island</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-9844062616029315122010-09-15T09:59:34.589-04:002010-09-15T09:59:34.589-04:00Stylistic brilliance. Great One Shot. Love and Lig...Stylistic brilliance. Great One Shot. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-24588714932106078722010-09-15T04:07:50.860-04:002010-09-15T04:07:50.860-04:00Beautiful...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah ShivayaBeautiful...<br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-37501166422515591622010-09-15T04:07:26.143-04:002010-09-15T04:07:26.143-04:00steven - that was fantastic - wow!steven - that was fantastic - wow!Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-59920921738100828532010-09-15T02:20:14.987-04:002010-09-15T02:20:14.987-04:00This was awesome. Really enjoyed reading it, thank...This was awesome. Really enjoyed reading it, thanks.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-72016478869660444502010-09-15T01:50:34.062-04:002010-09-15T01:50:34.062-04:00Cool write...I was wondering if this was another s...Cool write...I was wondering if this was another style of poetry.Emmanuel Ibokhttp://www.lordemmanuel.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-72754503331583073982010-09-14T22:34:36.837-04:002010-09-14T22:34:36.837-04:00very interestingly written and very creative! grea...very interestingly written and very creative! great one shot!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-6817912855404350612010-09-14T22:23:52.346-04:002010-09-14T22:23:52.346-04:00This was terrific. I loved the structure. And I fe...This was terrific. I loved the structure. And I felt so bad for that poor unsuspecting woman.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.com