tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post715359332010838058..comments2023-10-21T04:55:36.672-04:00Comments on Urbanality: I watched the sun come up from the departures lounge at SchipholSteven Marty Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-88721900011000031712013-07-16T23:14:42.491-04:002013-07-16T23:14:42.491-04:00Heartwrenching. I agree, totally BADASS. Love it. ...Heartwrenching. I agree, totally BADASS. Love it. Ms. Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14019535695178365268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-23783921368412998552012-03-08T10:39:06.999-05:002012-03-08T10:39:06.999-05:00wow. just wow.
edenwow. just wow.<br />edenEden Bayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08043540142363106345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-32616247055897269672011-09-30T14:32:53.049-04:002011-09-30T14:32:53.049-04:00Filled with pathosFilled with pathosOkellehttp://okelle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-18973020293419201212011-09-30T09:53:26.701-04:002011-09-30T09:53:26.701-04:00Wow--powerful piece. Love the comparison at the e...Wow--powerful piece. Love the comparison at the end, as well as the Shakespearean-like scene I imagined from the cuckold horns and orphan rags.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-2583501877517986382011-09-28T18:55:58.422-04:002011-09-28T18:55:58.422-04:00Fabulous write! Absolutely right on the money! Ver...Fabulous write! Absolutely right on the money! Very nice!<br /><br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/25/one-she-beckons-me-come-2/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/25/one-she-beckons-me-come-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-72910018966226443782010-11-16T21:40:26.174-05:002010-11-16T21:40:26.174-05:00Welcome to our potluck week 10, a poetry award is ...Welcome to our potluck week 10, a poetry award is assigned upon submission.<br />Old poems are welcome …hurry up, you have 12 hours to go before we are closed.<br />Hope to see you there. Cheers!<br />http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-moods-feelings-and.htmlAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-46175820277492807102010-11-16T21:40:16.430-05:002010-11-16T21:40:16.430-05:00brilliant piece.
Thanks for sharing.brilliant piece.<br />Thanks for sharing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-65408054753514568842010-11-15T14:01:23.723-05:002010-11-15T14:01:23.723-05:00Sowing black and white movie reels
Spool broken ya...Sowing black and white movie reels<br />Spool broken yarn mangled and mis counted<br />As I sing you nursery rhymes<br /><br />There’s something about burning pages<br />Or the way They find you in sleep<br />Ice falls to the bottom of empty whisky cage<br />Prisons fear I have captured the audience of your heart<br />Never knew you had one till I got here<br /><br /><br />Can you hear the secrets I left<br /><br />On pages that were not written<br />Because of the words that were lived?<br /><br />I met you on Broadway<br />Between Curtain and double space<br />The Audience is waiting<br /><br />You feel me under your chest heaving<br />Under your dawn I lie awake.Warcommanderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09099325530039197057noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-18446393902083971102010-11-13T14:43:58.319-05:002010-11-13T14:43:58.319-05:00first had to find out what humpty is...when i foun...first had to find out what humpty is...when i found out, i loved the comparison. you picture the pain and the ghosts of the past. <br /><br />Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall,<br />Humpty Dumpty had a great fall.<br />All the king's horses,<br />And all the king's men,<br />Couldn't put Humpty together again.Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-78337529109511974902010-11-13T09:04:53.048-05:002010-11-13T09:04:53.048-05:00eloquent. Especially the last three lines.eloquent. Especially the last three lines.Katleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16349020685336580947noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-53929601811258086522010-11-12T21:04:04.936-05:002010-11-12T21:04:04.936-05:00Badass SMG! I like your approach with words, and ...Badass SMG! I like your approach with words, and with Humpty.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05208163779302805785noreply@blogger.com