tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post7850138025834817190..comments2023-10-21T04:55:36.672-04:00Comments on Urbanality: D'Verse Poet's Pub Form for All (accentual-alliteration)Steven Marty Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-35407693275480001342013-07-13T07:44:15.062-04:002013-07-13T07:44:15.062-04:00ha, very cool... i thoroughly enjoyed this one, ex...ha, very cool... i thoroughly enjoyed this one, expecially the cardboard line. a great pieceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-36226944125014383252013-07-12T17:44:06.427-04:002013-07-12T17:44:06.427-04:00I wonder how many S & M freaks those nuns crea...I wonder how many S & M freaks those nuns created. Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-58148432282095700202013-07-12T17:05:37.846-04:002013-07-12T17:05:37.846-04:00Right. You are pointing at "it". Jesus i...Right. You are pointing at "it". Jesus is made an idol and there is no urge to *show* love. People rather make a show of love.<br /><br />Nice rhythm and rhyme. :-)<br /><br />God bless you. Stay cool in the turmoil. :-)<br /><br />╔══╗<br />╚╗╔╝<br />╔╝ worship ♫<br />╚══╝ CHRIST †Vacciniushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03631121664181976045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-43281559816688622832013-07-11T21:31:29.086-04:002013-07-11T21:31:29.086-04:00Ha ha... Clever. I'm the product of public sch...Ha ha... Clever. I'm the product of public schools. I don't think I got the raw end of the deal.Beth Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123202473118521429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-50802276841920631542013-07-11T19:41:10.232-04:002013-07-11T19:41:10.232-04:00Yep. I'm a product of Catholic education, too....Yep. I'm a product of Catholic education, too...Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-73213401372802924872013-07-11T18:28:13.155-04:002013-07-11T18:28:13.155-04:00Since I failed the task in the first go around: ht...Since I failed the task in the first go around: http://stevenmgrant.wordpress.com/2013/07/11/as-the-spirit-wanes-the-form-appears/<br />Steven Marty Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-42799608913072157442013-07-11T16:44:51.012-04:002013-07-11T16:44:51.012-04:00Sorry for the multiple comment but I was having pr...Sorry for the multiple comment but I was having problems getting the code thgroughAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-89403655816919670772013-07-11T16:42:26.905-04:002013-07-11T16:42:26.905-04:00I really liked the thrust and tone of this piece.&...I really liked the thrust and tone of this piece.>KBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-18483197388880908842013-07-11T16:42:06.115-04:002013-07-11T16:42:06.115-04:00I really liked the thrust and tone of this piece.&...I really liked the thrust and tone of this piece.>KNAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-74428726750108822412013-07-11T16:41:41.055-04:002013-07-11T16:41:41.055-04:00I really liked the thrust and tone of this piece.&...I really liked the thrust and tone of this piece.>KBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-80396606816621211862013-07-11T16:41:08.166-04:002013-07-11T16:41:08.166-04:00I really liked the thrust and tone of this piece.&...I really liked the thrust and tone of this piece.>KBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-21262434682809654272013-07-11T16:40:06.127-04:002013-07-11T16:40:06.127-04:00I really liked the thrust and tone of this piece.&...I really liked the thrust and tone of this piece.>KNAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-72345923357063702612013-07-11T16:39:02.797-04:002013-07-11T16:39:02.797-04:00I really liked the thrust of tone in this piece.&g...I really liked the thrust of tone in this piece.>KBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-89019317697806157732013-07-11T16:38:11.319-04:002013-07-11T16:38:11.319-04:00I really enjoyed this piece.>KBI really enjoyed this piece.>KBAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-20775721301450893932013-07-11T15:54:48.074-04:002013-07-11T15:54:48.074-04:00There's a nice rhythm and rhyme in this poem, ...There's a nice rhythm and rhyme in this poem, which, paradoxically, is almost exactly the opposite of what the challenge asks for.<br /><br />As to your subject, well, too many people want God/god to be safe and comfortable. For me, the creator and sustainer of the universe could hardly be safe ... unless he/she chooses to be.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-82938416712429186792013-07-11T15:50:48.675-04:002013-07-11T15:50:48.675-04:00Very hard to maintain a steady cadence of stressed...Very hard to maintain a steady cadence of stressed syllables as you develop a poem. This was a very cool exercise. Steven Marty Granthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-69799289595828729842013-07-11T15:35:01.089-04:002013-07-11T15:35:01.089-04:00Very nice rhythm to this as Glenn points out. I h...Very nice rhythm to this as Glenn points out. I have been safe from that type of God.. A blessed secular child-hood despite plenty of Lutheran priests around.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-88424619621737566482013-07-11T15:23:45.513-04:002013-07-11T15:23:45.513-04:00nice rhythms and good sense of a child's nurse...nice rhythms and good sense of a child's nursery rhyme here; it certainly harkens back, and renews each of our particular adolescent introduction to AllThatIs, or God, or gods, or Allah, or Yahweh. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-37779175420432595162013-07-11T15:12:56.183-04:002013-07-11T15:12:56.183-04:00i myself never made bad experiences with nuns but ...i myself never made bad experiences with nuns but my colleague went to a catholic kindergarten and the nuns were so bad that he left the house in the morning and spent the day in the forest instead...fun in a way but so sad..ugh... god in a box is no good thing.. can't say much rgd. allits as i never do them consciously...learning though...but will leave it to tony...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-13035709736211564232013-07-11T15:12:33.010-04:002013-07-11T15:12:33.010-04:00ha. god is easier to handle in cardboard, that is ...ha. god is easier to handle in cardboard, that is for sure...ha...at least you acknowledge a god though...see this is what happens in those schools...just saying...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-54449681722841203202013-07-11T15:10:11.092-04:002013-07-11T15:10:11.092-04:00This RULES! LOLThis RULES! LOLBubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.com