tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post7950239131681546818..comments2023-10-21T04:55:36.672-04:00Comments on Urbanality: DoldrumsSteven Marty Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-71180411418045679452011-06-03T23:46:41.904-04:002011-06-03T23:46:41.904-04:00soft shore of spring #i that alot. this was great....soft shore of spring #i that alot. this was great.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-72134087323740055102011-06-03T18:58:57.039-04:002011-06-03T18:58:57.039-04:00This is top notch. Very descriptive and alive. Gr...This is top notch. Very descriptive and alive. Graffiti to the change of seasons, the dread of heat and its different phases. Excellent!Henry Clemmonshttp://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/half-ness-friday-poetically.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-8183930915216386032011-06-03T16:15:45.936-04:002011-06-03T16:15:45.936-04:00Love this! love the lines: 'a distant dream in...Love this! love the lines: 'a distant dream in my wake' and 'I will navigate august Manhattan's burning quiescence and trade for Fall.' Ta!Darren Heathhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01351659174210222981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-60136902475544707352011-06-03T13:48:00.268-04:002011-06-03T13:48:00.268-04:00You took me right into the heart of the city with ...You took me right into the heart of the city with this one. Very nicely done with rich details.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/06/03/the-death-of-orange-friday-poetically/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-35686316796018809052011-06-03T12:19:29.146-04:002011-06-03T12:19:29.146-04:00Yep, that's Manhattan alright! Nicely done!Yep, that's Manhattan alright! Nicely done!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-1955108364491979832011-06-03T11:41:01.832-04:002011-06-03T11:41:01.832-04:00the garbage pile & graffiti sea.love it thanks...the garbage pile & graffiti sea.love it thanks for sharingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-62376851656810021682011-06-03T09:35:41.091-04:002011-06-03T09:35:41.091-04:00Love this... especially the 3rd stanza!Love this... especially the 3rd stanza!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-56792797953520477322011-06-03T09:16:27.949-04:002011-06-03T09:16:27.949-04:00Excellent piece. I love the allusion to Coleridge&...Excellent piece. I love the allusion to Coleridge's Ancient Mariner, and found the third stanza to be especially powerful.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-51286829960729032632011-06-03T08:52:21.162-04:002011-06-03T08:52:21.162-04:00beyond good - too few people are writing gritty mo...beyond good - too few people are writing gritty modern pieces...like thisBrother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-6753992166140611312011-06-03T08:04:15.446-04:002011-06-03T08:04:15.446-04:00oh, this is wonderful! great imagery and I love th...oh, this is wonderful! great imagery and I love the photo!Hopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-11919937007257366952011-06-03T07:16:41.788-04:002011-06-03T07:16:41.788-04:00hey look at the cool guy in the first comment...he...hey look at the cool guy in the first comment...hehe...i remember this one...lots of great textures in this one...could use some of that rain right now...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-62255898555749037492011-06-03T03:53:20.216-04:002011-06-03T03:53:20.216-04:00i much like the garbage baptizing, graffiti and al...i much like the garbage baptizing, graffiti and albatross...do you miss new york steven?Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-7487187516511807802011-06-03T02:17:53.387-04:002011-06-03T02:17:53.387-04:00Beautiful write!
Truly enjoyed it :)
Acrostic Po...Beautiful write!<br />Truly enjoyed it :)<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://marinelareka.com/?cat=498" rel="nofollow">Acrostic Poems</a>Marinelahttp://marinelareka.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-74364716671148579072010-07-09T13:47:09.269-04:002010-07-09T13:47:09.269-04:00Beautiful!Beautiful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12193660170785018142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-54687865349864153182010-07-08T23:38:58.467-04:002010-07-08T23:38:58.467-04:00Oh, I long for some of that July rain. The heatwav...Oh, I long for some of that July rain. The heatwave is wearing heavy now. "baptize garbage piles" - that's just a great line! <br /><br />The third stanza - is really good. "...on this graffiti sea." That's just an apt description of a city. <br /><br />Really enjoyed this poem, Steven.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-85287903124475012832010-07-08T22:14:44.966-04:002010-07-08T22:14:44.966-04:00some great imagery...the garbage pile & graffi...some great imagery...the garbage pile & graffiti sea...i can see your gotham summer...and i hope for fall with this heat wave...ack.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com