tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post8692192373728166169..comments2023-10-21T04:55:36.672-04:00Comments on Urbanality: Walk in the ParkSteven Marty Granthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12025403178005766557noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-66098991775469845632012-03-07T13:55:23.459-05:002012-03-07T13:55:23.459-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Eden Bayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08043540142363106345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-70386163169797457912012-03-07T13:54:55.783-05:002012-03-07T13:54:55.783-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Eden Bayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08043540142363106345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-81402689477301706662012-03-07T13:54:48.070-05:002012-03-07T13:54:48.070-05:00Cold, yes, but it's NY, and it's magical. ...Cold, yes, but it's NY, and it's magical. <br />edenEden Bayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08043540142363106345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-32931480784524305392012-03-07T13:54:38.999-05:002012-03-07T13:54:38.999-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Eden Bayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08043540142363106345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-67493992903140972952012-03-07T13:54:31.030-05:002012-03-07T13:54:31.030-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Eden Bayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08043540142363106345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-88496028476288860082011-12-21T04:46:49.257-05:002011-12-21T04:46:49.257-05:00"Then the hour is loose as the music...."..."Then the hour is loose as the music....".Fantastic to knw you like Kerouac and that comes through your lines.The whole rhythm moves in a likewise bohemian way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-84220124928008108652011-12-19T11:43:05.522-05:002011-12-19T11:43:05.522-05:00Wow this is good! Merry Christmas!
Anna :o]Wow this is good! Merry Christmas!<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-48165925792437472052011-12-18T21:56:17.928-05:002011-12-18T21:56:17.928-05:00Awesome winter write! Very nice!
http://charleslm...Awesome winter write! Very nice!<br /><br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-41755343281555265742011-12-18T20:12:24.382-05:002011-12-18T20:12:24.382-05:00When I read this I hear Jack Webb reciting this po...When I read this I hear Jack Webb reciting this poem. I like it.booguloohttp://booguloo.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-68208245888678729842011-12-18T19:16:02.049-05:002011-12-18T19:16:02.049-05:00stay warm and drystay warm and dryAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-80224619758945627812010-12-03T10:37:36.019-05:002010-12-03T10:37:36.019-05:00Wonderful imagery!
Thanks for this one shot!
retr...Wonderful imagery!<br /><br />Thanks for this one shot!<br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2010/11/retrieval.html" rel="nofollow">retrieval</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-40529282745270582622010-12-02T06:31:22.754-05:002010-12-02T06:31:22.754-05:00A very good verse.. I enjoyed it a lot...
Thanks f...A very good verse.. I enjoyed it a lot...<br />Thanks for sharing...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-51666494385803806412010-12-02T00:04:26.324-05:002010-12-02T00:04:26.324-05:00very strong imagery... and the last lines "th...very strong imagery... and the last lines "the cold empty heart<br />of New York" -- great finish.Helena Malheurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12306591221090287590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-57147759714581472092010-12-01T12:39:36.578-05:002010-12-01T12:39:36.578-05:00So sad, lonely, and cold...sounds like a move is n...So sad, lonely, and cold...sounds like a move is necessary! ;)) Very well done as always! ~AprilAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-91922335877742736842010-12-01T11:49:57.600-05:002010-12-01T11:49:57.600-05:00your words match the picture...and you almost mana...your words match the picture...and you almost managed to make me feel sad for a sorrowful central park..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-60669771527855658132010-12-01T11:31:21.143-05:002010-12-01T11:31:21.143-05:00Great poem. Spare and clean. I enjoyed this a lot....Great poem. Spare and clean. I enjoyed this a lot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-36613909306028911352010-12-01T11:14:47.439-05:002010-12-01T11:14:47.439-05:00I'd like to walk around there. I've never ...I'd like to walk around there. I've never seen snow, I bet I'd find it beautiful as heaven. <br /><br />Happy WW for a beautiful poet. <br /><br />Take care and keep smiling.Kenia Crishttp://poesiatorta.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-44983863091083199952010-12-01T09:31:30.118-05:002010-12-01T09:31:30.118-05:00Beautiful. Incidentally that is one of my favourit...Beautiful. Incidentally that is one of my favourite spots to sit and smoke a cigar when I am in New York. Thank you for making me smile. Love and Light, SenderAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-22060779054982359582010-12-01T07:47:39.205-05:002010-12-01T07:47:39.205-05:00Never been to Central Park, but felt like I took a...Never been to Central Park, but felt like I took a walk with you.<br />The word "staid" stuck out to me.<br />Ima gonna try that word sometime.Jerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-59794469012665951972010-12-01T06:05:38.154-05:002010-12-01T06:05:38.154-05:00beautiful, beautiful image, and wordsbeautiful, beautiful image, and wordsDeLihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15795530327579458125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-37548485738977349632010-12-01T04:27:07.050-05:002010-12-01T04:27:07.050-05:00Beautiful expression of Central Park on such a bit...Beautiful expression of Central Park on such a bitter cold day.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-35484147899264774692010-11-30T23:20:18.913-05:002010-11-30T23:20:18.913-05:00An evocative piece.An evocative piece.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-9747080675444271922010-11-30T22:09:34.300-05:002010-11-30T22:09:34.300-05:00staid and sorrowful, maybe, but the trees and snow...staid and sorrowful, maybe, but the trees and snow lend a beauty... and your poem is beautifulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-31569210870799138752010-11-30T19:15:16.081-05:002010-11-30T19:15:16.081-05:00Perfect, wish I'd written this.
Two poems i...Perfect, wish I'd written this. <br /><br />Two poems into this week and already I have the first of the new week's favorite poems' - cool. :)Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-387663636127765777.post-65126599896080506172010-11-30T19:03:44.336-05:002010-11-30T19:03:44.336-05:00Very nice, those cold winter streets..bleak and bi...Very nice, those cold winter streets..bleak and bitter...seeing only that white path in front of each step...thank you...bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.com