
After
being dead
for some time
my soul
began to rot
leaving nothing:
A peanut M&M
with no nut
inside
SMG
"When you drank the world was still out there, but for the moment it didn’t have you by the throat".......................................Charles Bukowski
3 comments:
The first half imposes reflection. How many of us are living with souls that died long ago? The second half creates a great visual that drives home the depth of the former. A big ole empty soul. Wow. I have experience with M&Ms so I shiver at the thought of a hollow peanut M&M. :
Really like the choice of line break between rot/leaving. The pause there is significant to me. Love to stop by again, looking forward to that next post.
Can't believe I haven't read this one. Like the comparison.
eden
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