From the Brooklyn Side
The
dusk climbed behind me
as
motorists and pedestrians
moved steadily
west and east
across
the Williamsburg Bridge.
They
traversed the grey steel,
above the
flood and ebb-tides,
in a
ritual as old as the city.
Below,
the East River roiled;
a rough
mix from the tail waters
of Harlem
and the Bronx Kill.
From
the apex of the bridge
I
watched the sun burn down
the
Manhattan skyline and
slowly drown in the Hudson.
I
recalled the Whitman poem
and
felt the ties between us.
In the
distance, the gray walls
of
granite and glass loomed;
today, as they will tomorrow,
and a hundred years hence.
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18 comments:
love this.
a bridge,
century old and story revealing.
sharp write.
williamsburger bridge and busy moving crowds.
lots of concrete imagery here.
beautiful entry.
I almost could hear the traffic and smell the East River. Well written poem.
full of history and imagery of antiquity
amazing write,
the sound, smell, sights, and other concrete noises make the poem live.
glad to see Brooklyn Side.
Now this is poetry. Love it.
sunset, and city crowds.
profound imagery.
love the details,
I feel the places.
What a vivid imagination you have. Well done.
Cheers!
awesome imagination.
a poem filled with fibers and muscles. rich content and lovely imagination.
Like the painting/poetry combo
concrete and skillful poem imagery.
reality and abstract thinking combine,
that's life.
well done piece.
writing is an adventure.
"today and a hundred years hence". love this line
an award for you,
http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2015/02/hyde-park-thursday-poets-rally-week-80.html
thanks.
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