Monday, April 14, 2014

Learning to Drive

5 comments:

Eden Baylee said...

I do like the voice accompaniment. It added a new dimension to a poem I already liked.
eden

Brian Miller said...

the trilogy of palm trees that told the story of LA...nice...ouch on the car hitting the boys pup...its sad a bit that cobblers are disappearing...just when the shoes get really nice...plut...they are gone...i like how you kept wrapping back first to the shoes, then the palms...cool read, enjoyed the listen...

Claudia said...

nice slice of life here steve....i drove the 110 when i was there... brought me back a bit.. ugh on the dog being hit by the car...nice bit of social commentary as well ..

Björn said...

A lot of things to like here. The contrast between the old homeless lady and the price of gasoline, the dead dog being cursed for it's delay and the similarities of your jobs.

Enjoyed.

Tigerbrite said...

Well done. Both poem and visuals. I really got the feel of LA today and your voice took me there too. Long time since I was there:)