Voicemail
“Hi Marty, it’s me.
I woke up this morning
and I couldn’t remember why
I was here so I think it’s time to go.
I know I loved you once
but the wind has changed direction
and I need to follow it. I wish you well
but I’ll understand if you can’t return the favor”
SMG
10 comments:
ouch. not the voicemail you want to hear...especially if you are not expecting it...the dear john of the new age eh?
Modern, compressed, mobile vm "dear john" - like that gypsy in Chocolat doomed to follow the call of the wind. Liked it -- a lot!
Very cool...that's how it's done these days...right to the point.
AT least you weren't dumped in a 140 character tweet - that'd be really demoralizing - but then again, having her say I don't know why I'm here can't be too good for the old ego,
great write, this is. Mosk
Ouch ~ I hate that people can't say good bye face to face ~ This is good ~
Sigh, voice mails make things that should be relayed personally WAY too easy. But it is a bit more 'personal' than a text or an email, I suppose. I enjoyed your 55.
"I can't remember why I'm here"... wow. That would be a punch to the gut. Yes, a modern day "Dear John" is what I thought at first, but then, perhaps, it would need to be tweeted for that? ;)
The digital dear John. That might actually be a relief to some.
So sad, but at least it's better than an SMS dear John
55 words to throw away so much on a whim? Seems harsh to me.
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