Sedoka
I let form invade
my normal creative processes
and attempted a Sedoka.
Originally Japanese,
it is a form created from
two, related, three line katauta
SMG
It's ok
2 days ago
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Why not? creativity inside or outside of form you do it well ... nice play with words
got to be careful letting form invade your poetry...next think you know you will get a bar code and they will track you every where you go...smiles...ha...nice form poem on form...
This is fun.
Now you need someone to reply in form.
Strike up a conversation :-)
Sweet! When in doubt describe.
Once in awhile, it is good to let form invade our words ~ You did a good job here ~
not bad at all to let form invade poetry every once and a while..the other way round as well...smiles
Interesting modern twist to the sedoka - and how can one resist a self-referential poem! Well played!
....loved the demo! smiles...
That about sums it up!
i heard this strange word
the sound of katauta
is it a maori love song?
no,it's japanese
if you please,a sedoka
not jokin' ya that's for sure
A sedoka to teach sedoka - what fun!
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